Last Call Review of draft-harkins-owe-05
review-harkins-owe-05-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-09-00

Request Review of draft-harkins-owe
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-13
Requested 2016-12-05
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Lucy Yong
Review review-harkins-owe-05-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/dIw-SICZjGHp57RmlpO6dNXy4LI
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2016-12-09
Review completed: 2016-12-09

Review
review-harkins-owe-05-genart-lc-yong-2016-12-09

The draft is nearly ready for the publication.
 
Minor comment: Suggest adding this in security considerations: OWE provides encryption over the wireless medium, i.e., Wi-Fi without authentication. Thus it does not provide security for end-to-end traffic.  users should still use application level security such as VPN for end-to-end security. In this case, use of OWE prevents VPN authentication info. to be spoofed in open public Wi-Fi.
one question: Will a user notices if OWE is used or not?  This may be important for some users. 

nit: r/encryption of the wireless medium/encryption over the wireless medium/