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Early Review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-19
Requested 2013-12-19
Authors Paul Hethmon , Robert McMurray
I-D last updated 2013-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -04 by Susan Hares (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-12-19
review-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04-opsdir-early-hares-2013-12-19-00
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From:

 Susan Hares [mailto:shares at ndzh.com]

Sent:

 Wednesday, December 18, 2013 6:57 PM

To:

 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org'

Cc:

 'draft-hethmon-mcmurray-ftpext-ftp-hosts at tools.ietf.org'

Subject:

 draft-hetmon-mcmuraay-ftpext-ftp-hosts-04



Ops-dir and authors:



This is an ops-dir review of your document.  I am your designated reviewer.



Reviewer: Susan Hares (

shares at ndzh.com

)

Status: Ready for publication

Editorial Comments: Excellently written.  English is clear. State diagrams
consistent, and appendices provide useful alternatives so that developers can
aid.



Technical comments: For this technology one can only say Wonderful!  At last we
get rid of some of the ftp limitations.



IANA section: Clear and provides good context for IANA.



Sue Hares

shares at ndzh.com