Last Call Review of draft-hoffman-dns-in-json-13
review-hoffman-dns-in-json-13-genart-lc-bryant-2018-04-16-00

Request Review of draft-hoffman-dns-in-json
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-04-20
Requested 2018-03-23
Authors Paul E. Hoffman
I-D last updated 2018-04-16
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Shwetha Bhandari (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -13 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -14 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -15 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-hoffman-dns-in-json by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-04-16
review-hoffman-dns-in-json-13-genart-lc-bryant-2018-04-16-00
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Document: draft-hoffman-dns-in-json-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2018-04-16
IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-20
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary: This is a well written document. ID-Nits picks up one issue that
should be looked at, and one sentence does not scan correctly. Other than these
minor points this is ready to go.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Nits picks up the following issue:
  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)

Nits/editorial comments:

   o  The format allows that transform through JSON would permit
      recreation of the wire content of the message.

SB> That statement does not seem quite right at least from a
SB> a British-English perspective.