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Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-07-13
Requested 2012-06-22
Authors Paul E. Hoffman
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Document: draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012–6–28

IETF LC End Date: 2012–7–13

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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.



Major issues:



Minor issues:

In the section 2 the second sentence is “The initial content for the Tao web
page will come from the last Internet-Draft that was meant to replace RFC
4677.”. I was wondering if this information is important to this document when
published. If it is maybe rephrase it to “

The initial content for the Tao web page is based on the last Internet-Draft
that was meant to replace RFC 4677”.

I also suggest that maybe it will be good to have an informative reference to
it.





Nits/editorial comments:



1.



Section 1 second paragraph “led” instead of “lead”

2.



Section 2 third paragraph “proposed” instead of “propsed”