Last Call Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-02
review-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-02-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-05-02-00

Request Review of draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-05-03
Requested 2016-01-17
Authors Christer Holmberg
I-D last updated 2016-05-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Ólafur Guðmundsson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Menachem Dodge
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-05-02
review-holmberg-dispatch-pani-abnf-02-opsdir-lc-dodge-2016-05-02-00
Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This intended status of this document is Informational.

This document makes some corrections to the ABNF of RFC 7315 which defines the
Private Header (P-Header) extensions for the SIP protocol for the 3GPP.

The Nits tool found no issues with the document.

RFC 7315 has Category "Informational" (I'm not sure why) but I guess that would
explain why this document has

intended status of Informational.

Looking at the content of this draft, I wonder whether it shouldn't be an
errata document on RFC7315 as it just listing corrections to that document.

I have no other issues with the document.

Thank you kindly,

Menachem Dodge