Last Call Review of draft-housley-id-sig-update-02
review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02-00

Request Review of draft-housley-id-sig-update
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-01-02
Requested 2017-12-05
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Francis Dupont
Review review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Muw4COFhU4fXVgY-EnlX5IqqAU4
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-01-02
Review completed: 2018-01-02

Review
review-housley-id-sig-update-02-genart-lc-dupont-2018-01-02

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Document: draft-housley-id-sig-update-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171221
IETF LC End Date: 20180102
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 2 and 10 page 8: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 1.1 page 3: I suggest to update RFC 2119 by RFC 8179

Note both comments can be addressed by the RFC Editor.

Happy New Year!

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr