Last Call Review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
review-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2022-02-11-00

Request Review of draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-02-25
Requested 2022-02-09
Requested by Mirja Kühlewind
Authors Peter Saint-Andre
I-D last updated 2022-02-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Russ Mundy (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Intdir Last Call review of -11 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -11 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -11 by Thomas Fossati (diff)
I18ndir Last Call review of -11 by Martin J. Dürst (diff)
Comments 
We're aiming to maximize the reviews for all documents associated with the change in the RFC Editor model. This document is the main deliverable from the RFC future editor model program and describes the new RFC editor model. The more eyes we get on this, the better!
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/0Tv9KVk9fHyVcmNenWdxUXM_lMg
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 13)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2022-02-11
review-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2022-02-11-00
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Document: draft-iab-rfcefdp-rfced-model-11
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2022-02-11
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: I have no major issues with the content of the document. I do have an
editorial comment that I'd like the authors to address.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1 says:

   "This document obsoletes [RFC8728] by defining version 3 of the RFC
   Editor Model.  This document updates [RFC7841] by defining
   boilerplate text for the Editorial Stream.  This document updates
   [RFC8729] by replacing the RFC Editor role with the RSWG, RSAB, and
   RSCE.  This document updates [RFC8730] by removing the dependency on
   certain policies specified by the IAB and RSE."

As there are no "Updates to RFCXXX" sections in the document, I think it would
be useful to add references to the Sections where 7841, 8729 and 8730 are
updated.  E.g., the definition of the new stream is quite easy to find, but
still.