Last Call Review of draft-ieee-urn-03
review-ieee-urn-03-opsdir-lc-hares-2016-12-12-00

Request Review of draft-ieee-urn
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-11-14
Requested 2016-10-22
Authors Angela Thomas
I-D last updated 2016-12-12
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -03 by Pete Resnick
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Susan Hares
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ieee-urn by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 03
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-12-12
review-ieee-urn-03-opsdir-lc-hares-2016-12-12-00
Angela:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These

comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments  just like any other last call comments.

Status of the document: ready with nit (minor editorial change)

Minor editorial nit:  Page 3

The abbreviation RDS is not used or defined in this document prior to its usage
in this sentence:

Old/The name space is not listed with an RDS; this is not relevant./

If you mean RDS to be RFC3406 abbreviation for RDS, then please use this
sentence.

New/The name space is not listed with an RDS (Resolution Discovery System);
this is not relevant. /

Sue Hares