Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-genart-lc-thomson-2014-08-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-08-22
Requested 2014-08-11
Draft last updated 2014-08-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Martin Thomson
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-genart-lc-thomson-2014-08-12
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 04)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2014-08-12

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Document:draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2014-08-11
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-22
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Summary: Ready.

Nits/editorial comments:

Looks like the first paragraph of the Security Considerations was left
hanging.  I looked and this sentence is a little confusing, since all
the MAX-ACCESS attributes are the same.

I'm not sure that this is something that would concern me either.
Sure, SNMP provides an attacker a great feedback loop if they want to
learn what is going on, but that is something you trade off against
things like being able to do things like maintenance and all that
necessary stuff.