Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-genart-lc-thomson-2014-08-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-08-22 | |
Requested | 2014-08-11 | |
Authors | Jürgen Schönwälder , Anuj Sehgal , Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) , Cathy Zhou | |
I-D last updated | 2014-08-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Martin Thomson
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Martin Thomson |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2014-08-12 |
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-genart-lc-thomson-2014-08-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document:draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03 Reviewer: Martin Thomson Review Date: 2014-08-11 IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-22 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: Ready. Nits/editorial comments: Looks like the first paragraph of the Security Considerations was left hanging. I looked and this sentence is a little confusing, since all the MAX-ACCESS attributes are the same. I'm not sure that this is something that would concern me either. Sure, SNMP provides an attacker a great feedback loop if they want to learn what is going on, but that is something you trade off against things like being able to do things like maintenance and all that necessary stuff.