Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2014-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2014-08-18 | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-09-05 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Martin Thomson
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Menachem Dodge |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05 | |
| Reviewed rev. | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
| Review result | Has Nits | |
| Review completed: | 2014-09-05 |
Review
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05
Hello,
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
Intended status: Standards Track
This document defines a subset of the Management Information Base (MIB) for managing IPv6 over Low-Power Wireless Personal Area Networks (6LoWPANs).
NITS
There are a few nits found by the nits tool:
== There are 1 instance of lines with non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs in the document.
== Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of
draft-ietf-6lo-btle-02
Comments
The document is well written and the Overview, section 4, is very helpful.
I have no other issues.
Thank you kindly,
Menachem