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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2014-09-02
Requested 2014-08-18
Authors Jürgen Schönwälder , Anuj Sehgal , Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) , Cathy Zhou
Draft last updated 2014-09-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Martin Thomson (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Menachem Dodge
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2014-09-05
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05-00
Hello,



I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other last call comments.

Intended status: Standards Track



This document defines a subset of the Management Information Base (MIB) for
managing IPv6 over Low-Power Wireless Personal Area Networks (6LoWPANs).

NITS

There are a few nits found by the nits tool:

 == There are 1 instance of lines with non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs in the
 document.

== Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of
     draft-ietf-6lo-btle-02

Comments

The document is well written and the Overview, section 4, is very helpful.

I have no other issues.

Thank you kindly,

Menachem