Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2014-09-02 | |
| Requested | 2014-08-18 | |
| Authors | Jürgen Schönwälder , Anuj Sehgal , Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU) , Cathy Zhou | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-09-05 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03
by Martin Thomson
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Menachem Dodge |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05
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| Reviewed revision | 03 (document currently at 04) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2014-09-05 |
review-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03-opsdir-lc-dodge-2014-09-05-00
Hello,
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area
directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any
other last call comments.
Intended status: Standards Track
This document defines a subset of the Management Information Base (MIB) for
managing IPv6 over Low-Power Wireless Personal Area Networks (6LoWPANs).
NITS
There are a few nits found by the nits tool:
== There are 1 instance of lines with non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs in the
document.
== Outdated reference: A later version (-03) exists of
draft-ietf-6lo-btle-02
Comments
The document is well written and the Overview, section 4, is very helpful.
I have no other issues.
Thank you kindly,
Menachem