Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration-18
review-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration-18-intdir-telechat-von-hugo-2024-04-29-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 19) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
Deadline | 2024-04-30 | |
Requested | 2024-04-16 | |
Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
Authors | Pascal Thubert | |
I-D last updated | 2024-04-29 | |
Completed reviews |
Intdir Telechat review of -18
by Dirk Von Hugo
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Secdir Telechat review of -18 by Scott G. Kelly (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -16 by Scott G. Kelly (diff) Genart Last Call review of -16 by Dan Romascanu (diff) Tsvart Last Call review of -16 by Kyle Rose (diff) |
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Comments |
This document is about multicast (hence intdir) and 6lo (hence iotdir). So, please have your directorate review this I-D on those directorate-specific points of view. Thanks. |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Dirk Von Hugo |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/BL8OjANk1T6JKnqusUj8GOlyz_A | |
Reviewed revision | 18 (document currently at 19) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2024-04-29 |
review-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration-18-intdir-telechat-von-hugo-2024-04-29-00
Dear authors, intarea community, as assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-6lo-multicast-registration my comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Based on my review, if I was on the IESG I would ballot this document as READY WITH NITS. I am no RPL expert but find the draft clearly written and AFAICT technically complete. Nits detected mainly affect grammar (a RPL => an RPL etc.), missing explanation of acronyms, to re-order acronym list, other typos (in my gut feeling as non-native speaker), missing ',' etc. ... I will post the diff-tool created .htm document in Pascals github (in case I succeed). Thanks and best regards Dirk