Early Review of draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-10
review-ietf-6lo-nfc-10-intdir-early-jiang-2018-09-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-nfc
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2018-09-21
Requested 2018-09-05
Requested by Suresh Krishnan
Other Reviews Iotdir Early review of -10 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -12 by Wesley Eddy (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Qin Wu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Leif Johansson
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Jari Arkko (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Sheng Jiang
Review review-ietf-6lo-nfc-10-intdir-early-jiang-2018-09-24
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/pNJPg163B2ZDC1RJlKNWzo1F7DU
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-09-24
Review completed: 2018-09-24

Review
review-ietf-6lo-nfc-10-intdir-early-jiang-2018-09-24

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for <draft-ietf-6lo-nfc-10.txt>. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/.

This draft looks good for me, with only a small Nit. However, I am not an IoT expert, therefore, a review from IoTDir is necessary. I also recommend a review from 6lowpan expert, particularly  Pascal Thubert, if it is practise.

'ECMA-340' is defined in reference section, but not quoted in the document.

Regards,

Sheng