Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2021-08-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-08-10
Requested 2021-07-22
Authors Jianqiang Hou, Bing (Remy) Liu, Yong-Geun Hong, Xiaojun Tang, Charles Perkins
Draft last updated 2021-08-09
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Joseph Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Robert Sparks
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu
Intdir Telechat review of -06 by Dave Thaler
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2021-08-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/7c-FeVYlvCOPGGHeemHIUuSaVdc
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2021-08-09

Review
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2021-08-09

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Document: draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-08-09
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-15
IESG Telechat date: 2021-08-12

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC, no more comments than those mentioned on the list.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Section 1, "Efficient"->"efficient"
Section 4.4, "Solicitaitons"->"Solicitations"
Section 4.6, "octects"->"octets"; "constranied"->"constrained" ; "fragements"->"fragments"
Section 6, "aming"->"aiming"