Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-08-10
Requested 2021-07-22
Authors Jianqiang Hou, Bing (Remy) Liu, Yong-Geun Hong, Xiaojun Tang, Charles Perkins
Draft last updated 2021-08-06
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Joseph Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Robert Sparks
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu
Intdir Telechat review of -06 by Dave Thaler
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/b3K_GTiMjjf3Bzg80w0F1B838DE
Reviewed rev. 06
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2021-08-06

Review
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06

This document describes how IPv6 packets are transported over constrained Power Line Communication (PLC) networks. It is a clear and well-written document and its content is relevant for all operators that will have such networks under their administration. I had however one concern that I expressed in my WGLC review. Version 05 of the document had no information in the document about the operational and manageability aspects. Following my review, the authors answered on the WG mail list and I find their answer sufficient at this stage. Version 6 now includes Section 6. Operations and Manageability Considerations which is good. 

This document is Ready from an OPS-DIR perspective.

Please fix the typo in Section 6: 

s/The recently-formed iotops WG in IETF is aming/The recently-formed iotops WG in IETF is aiming/