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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-06
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-08-10
Requested 2021-07-22
Authors Jianqiang Hou , Bing (Remy) Liu , Yong-Geun Hong , Xiaojun Tang , Charles E. Perkins
Draft last updated 2021-08-06
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -05 by Dr. Joseph D. Touch (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -06 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -06 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/b3K_GTiMjjf3Bzg80w0F1B838DE
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Has Nits
Completed 2021-08-06
review-ietf-6lo-plc-06-opsdir-telechat-romascanu-2021-08-06-00
This document describes how IPv6 packets are transported over constrained Power
Line Communication (PLC) networks. It is a clear and well-written document and
its content is relevant for all operators that will have such networks under
their administration. I had however one concern that I expressed in my WGLC
review. Version 05 of the document had no information in the document about the
operational and manageability aspects. Following my review, the authors
answered on the WG mail list and I find their answer sufficient at this stage.
Version 6 now includes Section 6. Operations and Manageability Considerations
which is good.

This document is Ready from an OPS-DIR perspective.

Please fix the typo in Section 6:

s/The recently-formed iotops WG in IETF is aming/The recently-formed iotops WG
in IETF is aiming/