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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2016-11-29
Requested 2016-11-23
Authors Dave Thaler
I-D last updated 2016-12-24
Completed reviews Genart Telechat review of -04 by Paul Kyzivat
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Benjamin Kaduk
Intdir Early review of -03 by Tatuya Jinmei (diff)
Intdir Early review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by Ron Bonica
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6lo-privacy-considerations-04-opsdir-lc-bonica-2016-12-24
Reviewed revision 04
Result Ready
Completed 2016-12-24

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

In fact, extremely well written, well researched and well considered. If I were
on the IESG, I would give it a YES

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