Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14
review-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14-secdir-telechat-sparks-2022-11-17-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
Deadline | 2022-12-13 | |
Requested | 2022-11-04 | |
Authors | Yong-Geun Hong , Carles Gomez , Younghwan Choi , Abdur Rashid Sangi , Samita Chakrabarti | |
I-D last updated | 2023-09-21 (Latest revision 2023-04-05) | |
Completed reviews |
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -12
by Robert Sparks
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Genart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -14 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -14 by Robert Sparks (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Robert Sparks |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/rfuTc6cxpG5lJHpCw5ynrqqxRAc | |
Reviewed revision | 14 (document currently at 16) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2022-11-17 |
review-ietf-6lo-use-cases-14-secdir-telechat-sparks-2022-11-17-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other review comments. This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments. The new Security Considerations text is helpful (though I would have preferred even more). I'll point to one last potential problem spot (as a nit) that you may wish to reconsider. See Section 3 at: "Encryption is important if the implementation can afford it." From the rest of the document, it's clear that Encryption is important even if the implementation _can't_ afford it (and what does "afford it" even mean in this context)? Please try to find more specific text to convey what you are trying to say.