Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04
review-ietf-6man-grand-04-genart-lc-romascanu-2021-06-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6man-grand |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-06-18 | |
| Requested | 2021-06-04 | |
| Authors | Jen Linkova | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-06-17 | |
| Completed reviews |
Tsvart Last Call review of -04
by Michael Scharf
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Iotdir Last Call review of -04 by Carles Gomez (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Scott G. Kelly (diff) Genart Last Call review of -04 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dan Romascanu |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-grand by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Overtaken by Events | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/6YRt5O0jmhcgLuDoXbAXzGCh7ag | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-06-17 |
review-ietf-6man-grand-04-genart-lc-romascanu-2021-06-17-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-6man-grand-04 Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review Date: 2021-06-17 IETF LC End Date: 2021-06-18 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready with Nits This is a very well written document. I appreciate the section describing the other Solutions Considered, which is a good guidance and reference for future discussions and extensions. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In Section 3 the Normative Language with capitalizations is used to describe requirements from solutions. This seems quite unnecessary, and certainly cannot be verified for conformance. 2. I would suggest moving or copying the first sentence in Section 6 (that says that all normative text in the memo can be found in this section) in the Introduction section.