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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-maxra-03
review-ietf-6man-maxra-03-secdir-lc-salz-2017-09-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-maxra
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 04)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-09-15
Requested 2017-09-01
Authors Suresh Krishnan , Jouni Korhonen , Samita Chakrabarti , Erik Nordmark , Andrew Yourtchenko
I-D last updated 2017-09-14
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Rich Salz (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Rich Salz
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-maxra by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 04)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-09-14
review-ietf-6man-maxra-03-secdir-lc-salz-2017-09-14-00
I reviewed this document for SECDIR.  It's ready.  I have one minor editorial
suggestion.  The introduction has this text:
  There are already link technology specific clarifications
   how to tune protocol constants for certain system with the
   expectation to reduce excess Neighbor Discovery Protocol (NDP)
   traffic. 3GPP cellular links are one existing example
   [RFC6459][RFC7066].

I would suggest rewording it like this:
   Clarifications for how to tune protocol constants to reduce Neighbord
   Discover Protocol (NDP) traffic already exist; for example [RFC6459] and
   ]RFC7066] for 3GPP.