Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12
review-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12-genart-lc-kyzivat-2022-02-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2022-02-10
Requested 2022-01-27
Authors Bob Hinden , Gorry Fairhurst
I-D last updated 2022-08-29 (Latest revision 2022-05-10)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -12 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -13 by Dr. Bernard D. Aboba (diff)
Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -12 by Olivier Bonaventure (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -13 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -13 by Olivier Bonaventure (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Paul Kyzivat
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/cSJ1VnpREVnAknRj_ANN0QFRdA0
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2022-02-04
review-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12-genart-lc-kyzivat-2022-02-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-6man-mtu-option-12
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2022-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2022-02-10
IESG Telechat date: ??

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.

Comments and Questions:

I didn't attempt to evaluate the security considerations as it is 
totally outside my scope. I trust this will be dealt with by a security 
review.

I have the following questions about the draft. (I don't think they even 
rise to the level of nits.)

1) Regarding PMTU range in section 5:

Was any consideration given to supporting PMTUs greater than 2^16?

2) Regarding multiplexing of Rtn-PMTU and R-Flag in section 5:

Min-PMTU is permitted to be odd, but Rtn-PMTU is forced to be even to 
allow room for the R-Flag. Hence, if the Min-PMTU ends up odd, then it 
will be rounded down in Rtn-PMTU.

Why not restrict Min-PMTU to be even as well? This would provide 
consistency and make clear that MTUs need to be even? This could be done 
by reducing Min-PMTU to 15 bits, adding a 1-bit reserved field, and a 
few explanatory words to the text.