Telechat Review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-06
review-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2014-06-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-06-10
Requested 2014-06-02
Authors Ralph Droms
Draft last updated 2014-06-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -06 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Kiran Chittimaneni (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2014-06-11
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 07)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-06-11

Review
review-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-06-genart-telechat-dupont-2014-06-11

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

<

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140530
IETF LC End Date: 20140530
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
(only editorial stuff in the case they are not caught by the RFC Editor)

 - 2 NEW page 4: contraint -> constraint

 - 7 page 5: missing final dot

 - Author's Address page 6: US -> USA

Thanks

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr