Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-29
Requested 2013-01-17
Authors Fernando Gont
I-D last updated 2013-02-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Tsvdir Last Call review of -03 by Allison Mankin (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 03 (document currently at 05)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-02-19
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19-00

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Please resolve these nits along with any other Last Call comments you may
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Document: draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-01-29

IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-29

IESG Telechat date: NA



Summary:

This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard.



Major issues:

none



Minor issues:

none



Nits/editorial comments:

[Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to
"[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though mentioned
in abstract)

[Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after "Certification
Path Advertisement messages"





Best Regards,

Meral



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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

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