Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-29
Requested 2013-01-17
Draft last updated 2013-02-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -03 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Tsvdir Last Call review of -03 by Allison Mankin (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19
Reviewed rev. 03 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-02-19

Review
review-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03-genart-lc-shirazipour-2013-02-19






I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> .




 




Please resolve these nits along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.




 




Document: draft-ietf-6man-nd-extension-headers-03




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2013-01-29




IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-29




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard.




 




Major issues:




none




 




Minor issues:




none




 




Nits/editorial comments:




[Page 3], Section 1, paragraph 2, sentence 2 --suggestion--> Refer to "[RFC3971]" when SEND is being mentioned the first time.(even though mentioned in abstract)




[Page 6], paragraph 3, --suggestion--> put "(CPA)" right after "Certification Path Advertisement messages"




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




 




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