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Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-09
Requested 2015-08-27
Authors Fernando Gont
I-D last updated 2015-09-11
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -10 by Klaas Wierenga
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
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Document:draft-ietf-6man-predictable-fragment-id-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date:2015-09-09
IETF LC End Date:2015-09-09
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC, but I have
some editorial comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 6] line 7, "the the Identification"--extra 'the'-->"the Identification"
-[Page 15], Appendix A., "the the algorithm specified"-extra 'the'-->"the
algorithm specified" -[Page 16], "(assumming the"--->"(assuming the" -[Page
16], would be useful to have figure captions if the message exchanges are
figures as referred to in the text. -General, please spell out acronyms at
first use, e.g. PRNG, DoS etc.

Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com