Early Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-09
review-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-09-opsdir-early-dunbar-2017-04-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-09
Requested rev. 09 (document currently at 13)
Type Early Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-04-21
Requested 2017-04-21
Requested by Gunter Van de Velde
Authors Steve Deering, Bob Hinden
Draft last updated 2017-04-21
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Papadimitriou Dimitri (diff)
Intdir Early review of -08 by Bob Halley (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Peter Yee (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -09 by Martin Stiemerling (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-09-opsdir-early-dunbar-2017-04-21
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 13)
Review result Has Issues
Review completed: 2017-04-21

Review
review-ietf-6man-rfc2460bis-09-opsdir-early-dunbar-2017-04-21

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors.

Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

 

I think the document is written very clear, except one issue:


Section 4 (page 7) states that (with one exception) extension headers are not examined by any node along the path because fragmentation may cause some fragments not having the complete headers (as described in the RFC7045).

 

But Section 4.4’s routing header is to indicate a list of intermediate nodes to be “visited”.

 

Does it mean intermediate nodes need to process the “routing header”?

 

In Section 4.5 (Fragment Header), I can’t find description on if each fragment should carry the entire Routing Header. If not, the intermediate nodes can’t guarantee all the intermediate nodes specified by the Routing headers will be “visited” by all fragments.

 

 

Linda Dunbar

 

 

Huawei USA IP Technology Lab

5340 Legacy Drive,

Plano, TX 75024

Tel: +1 469-277 - 5840

Fax: +1 469 -277 - 5900