Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-09
review-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-09-secdir-lc-gondrom-2018-08-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-06-25
Requested 2018-06-11
Other Reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Russ White (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Vijay Gurbani
Tsvart Telechat review of -08 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Tobias Gondrom
Review review-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-09-secdir-lc-gondrom-2018-08-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/0D6YnrVNgt3zB7QeL4U8YrL7phE
Reviewed rev. 09
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-08-02
Review completed: 2018-08-02

Review
review-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-09-secdir-lc-gondrom-2018-08-02

Reviewer: Tobias Gondrom

Review result: Ok

 

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

 

Overall the document is an update to RFC6434 and looks ok, ready to go. 

In my review, I did not find any material concerns with the document, and no
nits. 

The security considerations are nearly identical to RFC6434 with the added
paragraph in relation to IPv4 networking and reference to RFC7123, which is
ok. From the overall  new document text, it also is ok. 

 

Ready to release. 

 

Best regards, Tobias