Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20
review-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20-genart-lc-dupont-2019-07-01-00

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Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-20.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190633
IETF LC End Date: 20190626
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - 1 page 3: the IT abbrev is not introduced

 - 2.1 page 5 (bundle), page 9 (slotOffset), 4.61 page 38 (2.): i.e. -> i.e.,

 - 2.1 page 6 (chunk): missing closing parenthesis

 - 2.1 page 9 (Track): the text says the root is the destination. IMHO
   the DODAG has an unique leaf which is the destination?

 - 3.1 page 12: please expand the PCE abbrev here (first occurrence,
   note the expansion is in 3.3. page 15: you can move or duplicate it).

 - 3.2 page 14: the 6LBR ... need -> needs

 - 4.2.2 pafge 25 figure 6: there are multiple arrows for the RS. I believe
   it is a way to figure multicasting?

 - 4.3.1.1 page 27, 4.3.3 page 29, 4.5.3 page 35 (3 times), 4.7.1.2 page 42:
    e.g. -> e.g.,

 - 4.6 page 37: 
    one or more destination(s) 6TiSCH node(s)
  ->
    one or more destination 6TiSCH nodes

Spelling:
 - 1 page 3: undated -> updated
 - 4.1.1 page 21: settig -> setting
 - 4.3.3. page 29: infoirmation -> information
 - 4.3.3 page 29: behaviour -> behavior
 - 4.4 page 33: multithop -> multihop
 - 4.7.1.1 page 42: dependant -> dependent
 - 7.1 page 51: implementaton -> implementation
 - A page 60 (PAW): Predicatable -> Predictable  

At the exception of the DODAG root in Track definition there is nothing
which can't be done by the RFC Editor so could require a new version.

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr