Last Call Review of draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05
review-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05-genart-lc-even-2015-02-16-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-02-20 | |
Requested | 2015-02-12 | |
Authors | Thomas Watteyne , Maria Rita Palattella , Luigi Alfredo Grieco | |
I-D last updated | 2015-02-16 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Roni Even
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Donald E. Eastlake 3rd (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-02-16 |
review-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05-genart-lc-even-2015-02-16-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015–2-16 IETF LC End Date: 2015–2-20 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Some abbreviations are used before they are specified: LLC, WPAN, EB I was wondering what the purpose of Appendix B is, does it provide any requirements, in which case it should be part of the main document with normative language.