Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
review-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13-genart-telechat-davies-2021-03-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-03-23
Requested 2021-03-08
Authors Ludwig Seitz
I-D last updated 2021-03-23
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -13 by Charlie Kaufman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -13 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13-genart-telechat-davies-2021-03-23
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Yauw_b5iNrPx-nQ095FyFKmQxlM
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-03-23
review-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13-genart-telechat-davies-2021-03-23-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-13
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2021-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-13
IESG Telechat date: 2021-03-25

Summary:
Ready for publication with the wxcption of one very minor nit.  Thanks for
responding to my previous review.

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:
s5:  This section cover current usage.  s1 anticipates the specifications mught
find other usages, so... OLD: The confirmation method parameters are used as
follows: NEW: The confirmation method parameters are used in
[I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] as follows;  it is anticipated that they may be
used, potentially differently, in other profiles or protocols: END