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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09
review-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09-genart-lc-even-2024-01-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-01-25
Requested 2024-01-11
Authors Rafael Marin-Lopez , Dan Garcia-Carrillo
I-D last updated 2024-01-24
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Early review of -08 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Iotdir Early review of -08 by Eliot Lear (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/NtlB3j-w5gSKAVF6wKHpg75hIPE
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2024-01-24
review-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09-genart-lc-even-2024-01-24-00
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Document: draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2024-01-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
The document defines a well known uri. Through out the document it keeps the
name well-known but it should be replaced with the specified coap-eap by the
authors or as a directive to the rfc editor. As for the iana registration
request rfc8615 registration procedure is specification required and not expert
review. There is also a missing column “state” probably should be permanent.