Last Call Review of draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-07
review-ietf-acme-authority-token-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2021-11-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-acme-authority-token
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-11-16
Requested 2021-10-26
Authors Jon Peterson , Mary Barnes , David Hancock , Chris Wendt
I-D last updated 2021-11-03
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-acme-authority-token-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2021-11-03
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/aG97YZgQmi6tGHVt--QW3dV0rfY
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2021-11-03
review-ietf-acme-authority-token-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2021-11-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2021-11-03
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

I am a little confused if this draft is to describe the challenges of ACME ? 
or if the term  "ACME challenges" in the title is used to represent something
special? Is "Authority Token challenge"  to represent the challenge of
Authority Token?

What is the difference between the "Authority Token Challenge element" and the
"Authority Tokey Challenge object"?

Does the "ACME Challenge" the same as the "ACME challenge"?
Can authors add the definitions to the Terminology section?

Thank you very much
Linda Dunbar