Last Call Review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-07
review-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2021-11-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-11-29
Requested 2021-11-15
Authors Brian Sipos
I-D last updated 2021-11-29
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/ymq_II0xF8JlWm1twtERSJbPbjs
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 14)
Result Not ready
Completed 2021-11-29
review-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-07-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2021-11-29-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document specifies an extension to ACME protocol which allows an ACME
server to validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking Node ID for an ACME client.

Issues:

The document didn't describe how the Node ID described in this document is
related to the Delay Tolerant Network. I see the mechanism can be equally used
in any network. What are the specifics related to the "Delay Tolerant Network"?
It would be helpful if the document adds a paragraph explaining the specific
characteristics of the Delay-Tolerant Network that require the additional
parameters/types used for validating the Node-ID for an ACME client.

Thank you,

Linda Dunbar