Telechat Review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10
review-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2022-10-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-10-25
Requested 2022-10-14
Authors Brian Sipos
I-D last updated 2022-10-20
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Valery Smyslov (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2022-10-20
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/CWF_TFWCqaoSQlALUcCX7dygMFA
Reviewed revision 10
Result Has Issues
Completed 2022-10-20
review-ietf-acme-dtnnodeid-10-opsdir-telechat-dunbar-2022-10-20-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This document specifies an extension to ACME protocol which allows an ACME
server to validate the Delay-Tolerant Networking Node ID for an ACME client.

I had the following comments for the -07 version. I don't think the latest
version (-10) resolved my comments.

Issues:

The document didn't describe how the Node ID described in this document is
related to the Delay Tolerant Network. I see the mechanism can be equally used
in any network. What are the specifics related to the "Delay Tolerant Network"?
It would be helpful if the document adds a paragraph explaining the specific
characteristics of the Delay-Tolerant Network that require the additional
parameters/types used for validating the Node-ID for an ACME client.

Thank you,

Linda Dunbar