Last Call Review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06
review-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-03-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-03-22
Requested 2021-03-08
Authors Yaron Sheffer , Diego Lopez , Antonio Pastor , Thomas Fossati
I-D last updated 2021-03-25
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 09)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-03-25
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Document: draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-??
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2021-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

There are a few lines longer than 72 characters and this will fail the ID Nits
check. I dug a bit deeper and found out some of these lines were in the CDDL in
Appendix B. Here are the lines if that helps.

% awk 'length($0)>72 { print length($0) $0}'
draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-06.txt 73Intended status: Standards Track      
                         D. López 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-256, MGF-1 with
SHA-256, and a salt length of 32 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-384, MGF-1 with
SHA-384, and a salt length of 48 bytes 76; RSASSA-PSS with SHA-512, MGF-1 with
SHA-512, and a salt length of 64 bytes