Last Call Review of draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06
review-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06-genart-lc-yee-2022-07-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2022-07-08 | |
| Requested | 2022-06-24 | |
| Authors | Benjamin M. Schwartz | |
| I-D last updated | 2022-07-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Last Call review of -06
by Carlos J. Bernardos
(diff)
Artart Last Call review of -06 by Martin J. Dürst (diff) Genart Last Call review of -06 by Peter E. Yee (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Joseph A. Salowey (diff) Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by Scott Rose (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/T4D0gKTp6m_TFw0C26Ib-7PqttY | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2022-07-08 |
review-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06-genart-lc-yee-2022-07-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2022-07-08 IETF LC End Date: 2022-07-08 IESG Telechat date: 2022-07-14 Summary: This document specifies how SVCB can be used for named DNS servers, including ones that use any of DoH, DoT, and DoQ. There are nits that should be fixed prior to publication. I really have no complaints about this document and am not repeating any points that have been made in prior reviews. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: General: Perhaps change the two occurrences of "a SVCB" to "an SVCB" on the assumption that "SVCB" is read as ess-vee-cee-bee. Specific: Page 5, 1st bullet item, insert "to" between "trusts" and "not". Or place the "to" after "not".