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Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-02-28
Requested 2012-02-16
Authors Edward Beili , Moti Morgenstern
I-D last updated 2012-02-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Miguel Angel García
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Derek Atkins
Assignment Reviewer Miguel Angel García
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Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive.

Document:draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-09.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-02-24
IETF LC End Date: 2012-02-28

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:



- I have not reviewed Section 6 of this document, which is the actual MIB 


structure, because there is nothing I can comment on it. Considering that 


this draft has been produced in the ADSLMIB working group, I believe the 


expertise lies in the WG.






- I've noticed in the data tracker that IANA has requested a 


clarification with respect to the IANA Considerations section. The 


resolution of this discussion should be documented in the IANA 


Considerations section.




/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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Ericsson Spain