Last Call Review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-
review-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-genart-lc-garcia-2012-02-24-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-02-28 | |
Requested | 2012-02-16 | |
Authors | Edward Beili , Moti Morgenstern | |
I-D last updated | 2012-02-24 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Miguel Angel García
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Derek Atkins |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Miguel Angel García |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-02-24 |
review-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-genart-lc-garcia-2012-02-24-00
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document:draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-mib-09.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <miguel.a.garcia at ericsson.com> Review Date: 2012-02-24 IETF LC End Date: 2012-02-28 Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - I have not reviewed Section 6 of this document, which is the actual MIB structure, because there is nothing I can comment on it. Considering that this draft has been produced in the ADSLMIB working group, I believe the expertise lies in the WG. - I've noticed in the data tracker that IANA has requested a clarification with respect to the IANA Considerations section. The resolution of this discussion should be documented in the IANA Considerations section. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain