Last Call Review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-
review-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-02-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-02-28
Requested 2012-02-16
Authors Edward Beili
I-D last updated 2012-02-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
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Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-tdim-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Completed 2012-02-28
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard. I do have a potential concern that you may like to address.

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* Section 6: MIB definition

The index field 'gBondTdimOperSvcPosition' of 'gBondTdimOperSvcEntry' is
defined to have a MAX-ACCESS of 'read-only'. I believe that it should
instead be defined with a MAX-ACCESS of 'not-accessible' since it is an
index field.

Thanks
Suresh