Telechat Review of draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15
review-ietf-alto-deployments-15-genart-telechat-carpenter-2016-06-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-alto-deployments
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-06-28
Requested 2016-06-22
Authors Martin Stiemerling , Sebastian Kiesel , Michael Scharf , Hans Seidel , Stefano Previdi
I-D last updated 2016-06-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -15 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-alto-deployments by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-06-24
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Document: draft-ietf-alto-deployments-15.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-06-13
IETF LC End Date: 2016-06-21
IESG Telechat date: 2016-06-30

Summary: Ready
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Comment:
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This is a long document but well written, so there is little to say about it.

Minor issues:
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The Conclusion section could be deleted. It doesn't add anything.

There are a lot of Informational references that are still personal I-Ds. Many of
them are not even listed as "Related Internet-Drafts" for the Alto WG. I think readers
of the future RFC will find this a bit annoying.

Nits:
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<jan.seedorf at neclab.eu> and <martin.stiemerling at neclab.eu> bounced