Last Call Review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
review-ietf-alto-path-vector-17-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-08-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-08-25
Requested 2021-08-11
Authors Kai Gao , Young Lee , Sabine Randriamasy , Y. Richard Yang , Jingxuan Zhang
I-D last updated 2021-08-30
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -19 by Samuel Weiler (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -17 by Suresh Krishnan (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -17 by Tim Chown (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -16 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -19 by Tim Chown (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -22 by Samuel Weiler (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-alto-path-vector by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/SazzBTl8zOdqW_t-_uD6R0VPnMQ
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 25)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2021-08-30
review-ietf-alto-path-vector-17-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-08-30-00
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Document: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-??
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2021-08-30
IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-25
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Overall, the document is well done and easy to read for someone with a
background in past work done at alto.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Please add some IPv6 examples in Section 8.