Last Call Review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
review-ietf-alto-path-vector-17-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-08-30-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-alto-path-vector |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 25) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2021-08-25 | |
| Requested | 2021-08-11 | |
| Authors | Kai Gao , Young Lee , Sabine Randriamasy , Y. Richard Yang , Jingxuan Zhang | |
| Draft last updated | 2021-08-30 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -19
by
Samuel Weiler
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Genart Last Call review of -17 by Suresh Krishnan (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -17 by Tim Chown (diff) Artart Last Call review of -16 by Paul Kyzivat (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -19 by Tim Chown (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -22 by Samuel Weiler (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-alto-path-vector-17-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-08-30
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/SazzBTl8zOdqW_t-_uD6R0VPnMQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 17 (document currently at 25) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2021-08-30 |
review-ietf-alto-path-vector-17-genart-lc-krishnan-2021-08-30-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-?? Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2021-08-30 IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-25 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Overall, the document is well done and easy to read for someone with a background in past work done at alto. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: Please add some IPv6 examples in Section 8.