Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-ancp-pon |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-04-10 | |
Requested | 2012-04-09 | |
Authors | Dr. Nabil N. Bitar , Sanjay Wadhwa , Thomas Haag , Li Hongyu | |
I-D last updated | 2012-04-09 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Roni Even
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff) Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Allison Mankin |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-ancp-pon by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2012-04-09 |
review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013–2–12 IETF LC End Date: 2013-2–19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.