Last Call Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-04-10
Requested 2012-04-09
Authors Nabil Bitar, Sanjay Wadhwa, Thomas Haag, Li Hongyu
Draft last updated 2012-04-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Roni Even
Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Tsvdir Early review of -?? by Allison Mankin
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-ancp-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2012-04-09
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2012-04-09


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.



Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2013–2–12

IETF LC End Date: 2013-2–19

IESG Telechat date: 


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC




Major issues:


Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:

OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.