Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17
review-ietf-anima-brski-prm-17-dnsdir-lc-tale-2025-02-04-00

For the DNS Directorate, I have focused my review on the DNS-salient
aspects of the draft.

The core protocol use of DNS-SD looks spot-on, so no issues there.

This draft does a callout to RFC 8995 for core definitions, which does
fortunately include a definition of "Domain" that makes it clear that
it isn't talking only about a domain name in the common DNS sense.
However, neither 8995's Terminology section nor the one here define
Domain Registrar, and given that it is a reasonably common term on the
Internet for which people will have a preconceived notion of its
meaning, it'd be good to identify in Terminology here not only what it
does mean, but to explicitly acknowledge that it is not a DNS
registrar.

Section 10.2 for IANA is titled "DNS Service Names" but fails to
mention where IANA is registering this information.  I believe you
mean the Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry,
which is not a DNS Service Name registry.  Please add the registry
name in the section, and delete DNS from the section title.

I've noted that a number of other reviews have already covered matters
of proofreading, and rather than attempt to de-duplicate the minor
errors I also saw, I've instead trusted that they were all already
covered.