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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-08-21
Requested 2018-08-07
Authors Michael H. Behringer , Brian E. Carpenter , Toerless Eckert , Laurent Ciavaglia , Jéferson Campos Nobre
Draft last updated 2018-08-19
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Tianran Zhou
State Completed
Review review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-08-19
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. This
document is clear to me and is ready for publication.

By the way, do you think "MRACL" in this document need a reference or expansion?

Cheers,
Tianran