Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-08-21
Requested 2018-08-07
Other Reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel Halpern
Review State Completed
Reviewer Tianran Zhou
Review review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/CepJz5KZsyIjhmFzcY63iIwdclU
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-08-19
Review completed: 2018-08-19

Review
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-06-opsdir-lc-zhou-2018-08-19

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. This document is clear to me and is ready for publication.

By the way, do you think "MRACL" in this document need a reference or expansion?

Cheers,
Tianran