Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-08-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-11-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-anima-reference-model |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2018-10-23 | |
Requested | 2018-10-08 | |
Authors | Michael H. Behringer , Brian E. Carpenter , Toerless Eckert , Laurent Ciavaglia , Jéferson Campos Nobre | |
I-D last updated | 2018-10-11 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Telechat review of -07
by Christian Hopps
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff) Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff) Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Joel M. Halpern |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-anima-reference-model by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2018-10-11 |
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-08-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-11-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2018-10-11 IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-21 IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-25 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Informational RFC. I appreciate the author's work in addressing my concerns. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference. In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example", seems to have no closing parenthesis.