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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-08-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-23
Requested 2018-10-08
Authors Michael H. Behringer , Brian E. Carpenter , Toerless Eckert , Laurent Ciavaglia , Jéferson Campos Nobre
Draft last updated 2018-10-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Telechat review of -07 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Tianran Zhou (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joel M. Halpern
State Completed
Review review-ietf-anima-reference-model-08-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-11
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2018-10-11
review-ietf-anima-reference-model-08-genart-telechat-halpern-2018-10-11-00
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Document: draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-08
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-10-11
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-21
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-25

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Informational RFC.

I appreciate the author's work in addressing my concerns.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    The reference [IDevID] still appears to me to be a normative reference.

   In 3.3.3, the new parenthetical e.g. (replacing the wording "For example",
   seems to have no closing parenthesis.