Last Call Review of draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-07
Requested rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-11-25
Requested 2017-11-12
Requested by Terry Manderson
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INT and IOT reviewers, please pay additional attention to section 2.1.  Stable Connectivity for Centralized OAM

Security reviewers, in addition to the Sec Considerations section please review section 2.1.7.  Encryption of data-plane connections

Review State Completed
Reviewer Magnus Nystrom
Review review-ietf-anima-stable-connectivity-07-secdir-lc-nystrom-2017-11-27
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 10)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2017-11-27
Review completed: 2017-11-27


I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

This document describes how to leverage the Automatic Control Plane (ACP)
in Automatic Networks (AN) to provide stable and secure connectivity for
Operations, Administration and Maintenance (OAM) processes. The document is
intended to be *informational*.

The document is well written and has an adequate Security Considerations
section. I have no issues with this document. Minor nit: "encryption
protected" -> "encrypted."
-- Magnus