Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-voucher-06
review-ietf-anima-voucher-06-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2017-12-12-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-anima-voucher |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-12-12 | |
| Requested | 2017-11-12 | |
| Authors | Kent Watsen , Michael Richardson , Max Pritikin , Toerless Eckert | |
| I-D last updated | 2017-12-12 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Russ Housley
(diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Joe Clarke (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Joe Clarke (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Joe Clarke |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-anima-voucher by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2017-12-12 |
review-ietf-anima-voucher-06-opsdir-telechat-clarke-2017-12-12-00
I have been assigned draft-ietf-anima-voucher to review for the ops directorate. I have read over -06, and I feel that this document is ready. My comments from -05 have been discussed and addressed. There were a couple of nits I have in -06, however. Please find them below: Section 2: Old Text: The MAS concept is explained in more detail in... New Text: The MASA concept is explained in more detail in... (Note: MAS => MASA) Old Text: Registrar See Join Registrar New Text: Registrar: See Join Registrar (Note: colon added)