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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-anima-voucher-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-anima-voucher
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type Telechat Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-12
Authors Kent Watsen , Michael Richardson , Max Pritikin , Toerless Eckert
I-D last updated 2017-12-12
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Joe Clarke
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-anima-voucher by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 07)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-12-12
I have been assigned draft-ietf-anima-voucher  to review for the ops
directorate.  I have read over -06, and I feel that this document is ready.  My
comments from -05 have been discussed and addressed.  There were a couple of
nits I have in -06, however.  Please find them below:

Section 2:

Old Text:

The MAS concept is explained in more detail in...

New Text:

The MASA concept is explained in more detail in...

(Note: MAS => MASA)

Old Text:

Registrar  See Join Registrar

New Text:

Registrar:  See Join Registrar

(Note: colon added)