Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07
review-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-04-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-05
Requested 2015-04-23
Authors Murray Kucherawy
I-D last updated 2020-01-21 (Latest revision 2015-06-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Brian E. Carpenter
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 11)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2015-04-28
review-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-04-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2015-04-27
IETF LC End Date: 2015-05-05
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: Almost ready
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Comment:
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As the writeup says, this is an update to a long document that mainly resolves a
notified erratum and some oversights in the previous version's IANA material.
Therefore I did not review the whole document. As far as I can tell, the changes
reflect the description in the writeup. (I assume that IANA will work with the
author to get the registry updates exactly right.)

Minor Issue:
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IMHO the "Change History" section should be summarised in a "Changes since RFC7001"
section (rather than being deleted).

Nit:
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6.7.  SMTP Enhanced Stauts Codes

s/Stauts/Status/