Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07
review-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-04-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-05-05 | |
| Requested | 2015-04-23 | |
| Authors | Murray Kucherawy | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-04-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -07
by
Brian E. Carpenter
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Brian E. Carpenter (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Brian E. Carpenter |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-04-28
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| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Almost Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-04-28 |
review-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07-genart-lc-carpenter-2015-04-28-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc7001bis-07.txt Reviewer: Brian Carpenter Review Date: 2015-04-27 IETF LC End Date: 2015-05-05 IESG Telechat date: Summary: Almost ready -------- Comment: -------- As the writeup says, this is an update to a long document that mainly resolves a notified erratum and some oversights in the previous version's IANA material. Therefore I did not review the whole document. As far as I can tell, the changes reflect the description in the writeup. (I assume that IANA will work with the author to get the registry updates exactly right.) Minor Issue: ------------ IMHO the "Change History" section should be summarised in a "Changes since RFC7001" section (rather than being deleted). Nit: ---- 6.7. SMTP Enhanced Stauts Codes s/Stauts/Status/