Last Call Review of draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04
review-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-05-07-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-05-07 | |
| Requested | 2014-04-24 | |
| Authors | Mark Nottingham | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-05-07 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -04
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -04 by David L. Black (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2014-05-07 |
review-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-05-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-uri-get-off-my-lawn-04 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-05-06 IETF LC End Date: 2014-05-07 IESG Telechat date: 2014-05-15 Summary: This draft is ready to be published as BCP RFC but I have some editorial comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 2], Section 1, "Because the owner of the URI (as defined in [webarch] Section 2.2.2.1) is choosing to use the server or the software" it is not clear what is meant by the part "or the software" -[Page 6], Section 2.5, "For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers across media types not controlled by it is not conforming,... " suggestion for easier read: " For example, an application that defines common fragment identifiers across media types not controlled by it is said to be non-conforming, and would " Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson www.ericsson.com