Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
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Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-09-22
Requested 2016-09-09
Authors Christer Holmberg
I-D last updated 2016-11-28 (Latest revision 2016-10-13)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -02 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Scott G. Kelly (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Rick Casarez (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 06)
Result Ready
Completed 2016-09-19
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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02.txt 

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies

Review Date: 2016/09/15

IETF LC End Date: 2016/09/22

IESG Telechat date: (if known) -

Summary: Ready (apart from a tiny bit of pedantry).

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

s3.1: It is a bit pedantic, but 'to be sure, to be sure', add new first line:

   In the rest of this section references to Sections 4 and 8 are to sections in [RFC 5761].

s3.1: Maybe s/OLD TEXT/EXISTING TEXT/ and s/NEW TEXT/REPLACEMENT TEXT/

s5: s/specifcation/specification/ (sorreee!)

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