Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-
review-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-04-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-03-22
Requested 2012-03-09
Draft last updated 2012-04-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -?? by Suresh Krishnan
Assignment Reviewer Suresh Krishnan
State Completed
Review review-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-04-01
Review completed: 2012-04-01

Review
review-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-04-01

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for
draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-07.txt

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but I
have a minor concern that you may like to address.

Minor
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* The document uses some addresses in the RFC1918 range as example
addresses. It would be better to use addresses explicitly reserved for
documentation (The document does indeed use these addresses as well).
Specifically I would recommend replacing the RFC1918 address 10.0.1.4
with an address in the 203.0.113.0/24 range from RFC5735.

Thanks
Suresh