Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-
review-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-04-01-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2012-03-22 | |
Requested | 2012-03-09 | |
Authors | Magnus Westerlund , Ingemar Johansson , Colin Perkins , Piers O'Hanlon , Ken Carlberg | |
I-D last updated | 2012-04-01 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -??
by Suresh Krishnan
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Assignment | Reviewer | Suresh Krishnan |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Completed | 2012-04-01 |
review-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-genart-lc-krishnan-2012-04-01-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-avtcore-ecn-for-rtp-07.txt For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html >. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but I have a minor concern that you may like to address. Minor ===== * The document uses some addresses in the RFC1918 range as example addresses. It would be better to use addresses explicitly reserved for documentation (The document does indeed use these addresses as well). Specifically I would recommend replacing the RFC1918 address 10.0.1.4 with an address in the 203.0.113.0/24 range from RFC5735. Thanks Suresh