Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06
review-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06-genart-lc-campbell-2013-12-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2013-12-09 | |
Requested | 2013-11-25 | |
Authors | Kevin Gross , Ray van Brandenburg | |
I-D last updated | 2013-12-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Ben Campbell
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Ben Campbell (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Victor Kuarsingh (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Ben Campbell |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2013-12-07 |
review-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06-genart-lc-campbell-2013-12-07-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-leap-second-06 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2013-12-6 IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-9 Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a standards track RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- 3.3, last paragraph: should "second" be "seconds"? -- 5, last paragraph: "the a warping technique" extra article. -- 5.1, title: Should that say _RTCP_ Sender Reports?