Telechat Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18
review-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-09-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2012-09-11
Requested 2012-07-26
Authors Qin Wu, Geoff Hunt, Philip Arden
Draft last updated 2012-09-10
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -17 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -18 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Tina Tsou
Secdir Telechat review of -?? by Tina Tsou
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-09-10
Reviewed rev. 18 (document currently at 22)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2012-09-10

Review
review-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2012-09-10

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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-monarch-18
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2012-09-10
IETF LC End Date: 2012-08-02 
IESG Telechat date: 2012-09-13

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an RFC but I have some last editorial comments.

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 5], in the definition of "Application level metrics", typo: "ususally"--typo-->"usually"
-[Page 9], Section 3.2, 3rd paragraph, "can use for it's reports"---->"can use for its reports"
-[Page 19], Section 9, "encyption of"--typo-->"encryption of"

New versions available since last update:
-Section 11, Ref [MEASI], version 10 is latest. If appropriate, please consider updating.
-Section 11, Ref [PDV], version 05 is latest. If appropriate, please consider updating.


Thanks,
Meral


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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
Research
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