Last Call Review of draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy-06
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy-06-opsdir-lc-dodge-2015-07-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-07-07 | |
| Requested | 2015-05-08 | |
| Authors | Jonathan Lennox , Kevin Gross , Suhas Nandakumar , Gonzalo Salgueiro , Bo Burman | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-07-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Robert Sparks
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Robert Sparks (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Menachem Dodge (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Menachem Dodge |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-07-13 |
review-ietf-avtext-rtp-grouping-taxonomy-06-opsdir-lc-dodge-2015-07-13-00
Hello,
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
This document is for the Informational Track.
This document describes some existing and proposed properties and relationships
among RTP sources, and defines common terminology for discussing protocol
entities and their relationships. The aim of this document is to clarify any
confusion that may be prevalent due to inconsistent usage by multiple
technologies and protocols that are making use of RTP.
The document is well written.
The nits tool has found the following:
== Outdated reference: A later version (-08) exists of
draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-multi-stream-07
== Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of
draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-topologies-update-08
Unfortunately, I have not had time to make an in depth review of this document,
However, I have made a brief review of the document and have found no issues.
Thank you kindly,
Menachem